@Merovius 😁 Sorry. Bear in mind that this was an example and it is the full impression of the text that I have issues with. But that said, finding other ways to express this can do wonders for your text and finding your own form 😊

These words from Harvard’s writing center bring home the point.

> Avoid phrases like "in conclusion," "to conclude," "in summary," and "to sum up." These phrases can be useful–even welcome–in oral presentations. But readers can see, by the tell-tale compression of the pages, when an essay is about to end. You'll irritate your audience if you belabor the obvious.

Harvard College Writing Center:
https://writingcenter.fas.harvard.edu/pages/ending-essay-conclusions

The Writing Center at George Mason University also addresses this:
https://writingcenter.gmu.edu/articles/7015